I made a Google form for Mechanoids just like what I did with Flame of Oblivion. I asked people what is good about the idea and how it can be improved, and I asked for opinions on the poster and characters.
Link to survey: https://forms.gle/4NmyiuYVxN2vF7Ru8
Here is the feedback I got on it:
Does my concept work?
- Yes
- Yes
Would you watch this?
- Maybe
- No
What do you think is good about this concept and why?
- think its a cool idea and quite different
- I like that you thought up of your own character traits and storyline.
What can I improve and why?
- would be nice to maybe have a start to introduce your characters so I can remember all their names
- Some parts of your synopsis are confusing, like the clone/statue idea. You should make this super clear for the audience – how exactly are the mechanoids in danger?
What do you think of this poster?
- I like it, think it looks really interesting and I like the bright colours contrasting the dark background.
- It’s cool but there’s a lot going on and the attention doesn’t stay on the main trio in the middle.
What do you think of the main trio? (Left to right: Shockwing, Freezy, Sweepuff)
- really nice and good colour combos
- Nice variety in the design.
What do you think of the villains? (Left to right: Leggy, Lord Froggy, Spongy, Kevin T. Pebble)
- nice and easily differentiated from the main trio
- Nobody except Lord Froggy looks threatening enough. Perhaps make the colours darker?
Any other thoughts you would like to share?
none
Overall feedback
Overall, I think the feedback I got was mostly positive. People thought my concept was good, but they wouldn’t watch it. They thought the designs were differentiated and unique, and they said I should make the plot less confusing and introduce the characters at the start.