Link to presentation: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1HErBIW5ychPmnynlSYUdICmMgWKOvJux/edit#slide=id.p1
We made presentations explaining our next steps for the future.
Here is the feedback I got:
Archie – Don’t worry about the length of your presentation it’s just great to see you presenting it’s a really big step to take, and I hope you will continue to become more comfortable talking in front of others. I loved the work you showed, and hope you do well on the games course I think you will be well suited.
Craig – Was quiet at 1st, but that picked up as it went on. Showed a lot of your work. You have a plan of what you want to do moving onward too.
Lily – Good pictures, and slides. A little bit quiet but that’ll come with experience.
Tegan – Confident, started off quiet and occasionally slipped but overall you were good.
Tina – You’ve taken previous feedback into consideration – your presentation skills have improved. You could still be more outspoken though, your work is cool so be confident! Nice slides and planning.
Will – your work is sick my guy, I enjoyed the PowerPoint, be more confident guy your work is amazing!
Samir – The presentation from last time has improved, a little quiet to start a bit and not sure what you’re saying at times. Good use of your content, shows your confidence in what you do.
Bilal – I like the yellow-orange theme of the slides, Good showing of your previous work too, and Passion for games which is relatable because games are cool. Other than that short and sweet, I’d say try to be more confident in yourself. Not knowing you beforehand, it’s nice to know your interests and goals, good luck with it all
Kayla – A little quiet to start out with, but you seem reasonably confident. The contrast between colours seems a little off, making certain pieces of text harder to read, but it’s not too bad 🙂 You’re very straight to the point and explain your points well and clearly.
Chrissie- a little quiet. use of images. could add a little more into your plans but the layout is well done
Ellie- Good use of images and layout, I like your work, you did start off a bit quiet
Keebie-
What worked well
Your presentation was worthwhile to listen to because you outlined your dream job and put in your own fictional Mixel Characters for your examples. They deserve a place on the best characters you have made!
Things to improve on
As you have begun, you kind of slurred your words (as in, sounded quiet and mumbled) when you were presenting, but as it continued, you have sounded slightly louder and built up confidence throughout the rest of your Next Steps presentation. The SWOT Analysis you have produced looked oversimplified in terms of aesthetics. Next time you may want to put a symbol in each section.
From looking at the feedback I got, I will look at how well I did and what I need to improve on.
I managed to present clearly what I wanted to do in the future