Generating ideas & Synopsis – Your generating ideas section is excellent and shows you have a thorough knowledge of how to generate ideas and how to combine them to make them into a narrative. It was good to see you had thought of a few different ideas and had reviewed them to see if they would work. Your synopsis shows you have a thorough understanding of how-to summaries your story into a short paragraph. Well done. Target Audience – There is a lot to put in a target audience, but you have done a great job, and this shows you have conducted some thorough research into who your target audience is. If I was to be really picky it would be great to see some more subheadings to break it up into a clearer target audience profile. Concept Art – This is some really great concept art and shows you have a thorough understanding of the concept design phase, hopefully this will help you bring your story to life. Storyboards – You mentioned that you had created some storyboards, but it was a shame not to see any evidence of this although you have said to me that you would upload them when you got home so fingers crossed you do that soon! Design Justification – Your design justifications were good; this shows you can communicate the reasoning behind your work without trouble. It was great to see how you had ended up with your final costume design. Overall, this is some really nice pre-production Alex so well done. This would be a Merit/Distinction level piece of work IF you had included those storyboards then it would be a Distinction so, please make sure you do that ASAP please! – Feedback by George